Thursday, June 9, 2011

Hard Bitten by Chloe Neill: Review by Anachronist

The second installment of my Summer Chicklit Reviews and things already are becoming a bit darker : Hard Bitten (Chicagoland Vampires 04) by Chloe Neill is definitely not all sunshine and goodness. Well, it is never so when vampires are involved.

Book info:
Hard Bitten (Chicagoland Vampires, Book 4)
Paperback: 368 pages
Publisher: New American Library; 1 edition (May 3, 2011)
Language: English
ISBN-10: 0451233328
ISBN-13: 978-0451233325
Genre: Paranormal romance
Target audience: Adults (more or less)


Caroline Merit, aka Merit the Cadogan House vampire and Sentinel, faces another crisis connected with her nemesis, Celina Desaulniers or Marie Collette Navarre. This time her house is blamed for every vampire-related disturbance in the beautiful but windy city of Chicago. It’s clear that somebody wants to create these disturbances only too often – vampires are secretly given a certain drug, white pills with a V pressed in them, and then they are invited to raves with humans. The drug makes them very volatile and aggressive- small wonder most of these raves end up in bloodshed and the help of the police is required. The problem is that more and more humans are rallying against supernaturals and especially against vampires – some of them picket the Cadogan House day and night with protest signs letting the vamps know that they are not welcome (to say the least of it).

Merit’s private life has improved but just slightly so. Ethan does what he can to make her trust him again but Merit is very wary and very bitter, unable to forget the way he backed out of a serious relationship last time (if you didn’t read the previous parts then fyi: he behaved like a total ass, showing that he cares more about politics and power than about her). Some new facts will emerge concerning Merit’s turning into a vampire without her consent and they will leave her dear Liege in even worse light. Not to mention the fact that Mayor Tate, a classic politician, practically blackmails Ethan with an arrest warrant from the CPD if he can’t keep vampires in line, knowing fully well that some vampires simply can’t be kept in line no matter what you do. As the book ends with a cliffhanger of a rather shocking kind I decided to include a spoiler for those who, like me, don’t mind being informed about such occurrences.

Spoiler section plus some of my rabid theories – highlight to read at your own risk.

The final is very dramatic, almost Shakespearean (I think here about those classic Hamlet performances with plenty of rapiers or foils swinging around): Celina all of a sudden stakes Ethan who shields Merit with his own well-muscled body, and Merit stakes Celina because now she lost any chance to reconcile with her beloved ex-lover (and she was definitely on her way to do so). With the death of Ethan the Cadogan House faces a bleak future – now it will be governed by a Receiver from the Greenwich Presidium, the body responsible for vampires around the world. I bet, though, that the new Receiver might be just the right person for some of the Cadogan vampires to make a new start. It pure speculation but I suppose Merit deserves to have a top-gun guy by her side and she can get him now, when Ethan is no longer the most serious obstacle. I never liked him but in this part he improved beyond belief – small wonder he had to die. Never believe a man when he says he will improve. ;p He is most probably lying and if he isn’t then he won’t live long.

What I liked:

The book was action-packed as I like and better paced than previous parts. The political intrigue was presented in a sensible way – neat, slick and horrible. I had absolutely no idea who was really pulling the strings. I also never saw the final showdown coming.

Merit is the main character, but unlike almost every other female protagonist in this genre, she has meaningful, strong relationships with other women. I really start to enjoy that aspect of the series. I think Merit is growing on me, maybe partially because she and Ethan were definitely behaving in a more mature way. Maybe her emotions haven’t been described very clearly but at least there was some ‘adult’ reasoning behind her actions.

Finally the cliffhanger…no matter whether you liked it or not you must admit the author was rather brave to end her fourth book the way it was ended because the move might kill the series in the long term. I never was a fan of a certain vampire and, reading so many emotional, even downright angry opinions, directed towards Ms. Neil, I was surprised a bit. Although I understand I cannot relate. Not really. Of course I can’t assess this plot device properly right now because I don’t know what will happen next but in my view it was the equivalent of killing off that old, wise, white-bearded protector of the main lead so he/she can progress and grow. A stuff which you can come across in every fantasy book and/or movie. I hope for the best and I praise the author for risking the fact that some readers, so drawn to the character in question, might not want to read the series any longer. You've got to be talented to kill off a popular hero, one of the main characters to boot, and redeem yourself as a writer in the next part. Just think about the pressure to write the next part so well to woo at some of the fans back. My best wishes Ms. Neill (but I don't envy you)!

Titillating factor:

No explicit sex scenes in this one but plenty of erotic tension which worked for me even better. Really sometimes less is more. Well done!

What I didn’t like:

The baddie, Celina…in my humble opinion she should have been presented in a different, far more exposed way. I mean she was one of the crucial characters and I found her rather underdeveloped. I like well fleshed-out baddies, with internal turmoil and all that jazz. Apart from that vampires in this series are supposed to be heavily political and tactical creatures. They're supposed to think two steps ahead, have a back up plan and be able to defeat their enemies without doing anything more than playing out their hand to its inevitable conclusion and here we don’t see any planning – we are shown a woman who just snaps at everybody or features in some blurry photos as a shadowy figure meeting with another shadowy figure– in other words we are left without one single juicier scene. Other characters have to fill in that void, discussing Celina’s motivations and aims. Lame.

What’s more…some plot lines were left hanging but hey, it’s not the ending of the series so not really a fault unless…the author forgets about them further on. We’ll see.

Finally the narration occasionally turned into a journal-like account of Merit’s most trivial actions like “I showered, I combed my long hair, I dressed, I went to visit a friend, I had an ice-cream or a deep-fry in such and such restaurant on the corner…” but it wasn’t as frequent and annoying as in the previous parts. However, I would like to read even less of it.

Final verdict:

A book definitely more emotional than a standard position of this genre - no HEA and no fluffy sense of physical well-being guaranteed. It is getting better but do you feel the same? :p I am inclined to give the author one more chance– I am very curious what will she do in the next part to atone for her sins. In other words: I will be reading book 5 but whether I read book 6 is a completely different question.


  1. I have only read the first book in the series. I really liked Merit too. Strong but easy to relate to.

    It sucks that series is improving a little too slowly though. Hopefully the next book in the series will be better. I hate giving up on a series. Great review Melissa.

  2. You are sure giving it many chances ;) And I still got book 2 before me and all the rest. And then I can also find out more about the shocking thing she did in her last book

  3. I've heard great things about the series; I must read the first book soon. An underdeveloped baddie can be disappointing. Thee are times when I like the negative characters more than the positive ones, so I expect the characters to be well fleshed-out.

  4. Thanks for your comment!

    Yes, I am all for second chances if a series has potential but really, the next part will make it or break it imvho.

    Good, conflicted baddie should never be underestimated. It is a huge asset of every fiction - I quite agree Misha, I sometimes like them better than white hats!

  5. I've only read the first two in the series and preferred the first one. But I liked them enough that I've bought the third and fourth - both are sitting on my tbr pile awaiting a time when I'm free to visit Chicago again...

  6. *sobs* I haven't read these yet. Now you know why you don't get that exclusive pass to my harem. You have read books I want to but can't get to just yet. ;)

  7. This is one of those series I am on the fence about. UF is one of those genres that is hit or miss for me but the story sounds really really good! I miss HEA's though when they don't happen. Still.....

  8. Hmm, not too sure of political intrigue. I have to agree with you about erotic tension being better than graphic descriptions - sometimes less is more.

  9. I read her other ya books but have not have time to pick up her adult books! Thanks for the review! Also I read the spoiler! Holy crap I'm missing out on a good book!

  10. I really love this series, and as shocked as I was that she had things happen the way they did, I was impressed that she had the guts to do it. I'm just going to keep having faith that she has a brilliant plan for the future books:) Nice review!

  11. Thank you everyone!

    @Felicia: I suppose this series will get its HEA but nobody can tell now when.

    @Petty Witter
    Definitely a very detailed, graphic description of the act puts me off more often than not.

    You are one brave girl indeed!

    @Jenny - thank you very much for your kind words!

  12. I like my baddies fleshy too. And erotic tension is usually better than the explicit stuff. Not crazy about the journaling stuff but I've got to check out this series! Always love the covers!

  13. "unlike almost every other female protagonist in this genre, she has meaningful, strong relationships with other women" - How true that is! It seems like strong, kickass heroines are portrayed as unlike the rest of her gender and so she can't have important female friendships, when the opposite is true!

  14. I can't deal very well with cliffhangers, especially if they feel contrived, which most do. I haven't read this series yet, but I am interested in it, especially if it has good characters and titillating sexual tension.

    Very thorough review. Thanks.

  15. @Alyssa
    The author does get better with limiting the journaling but still...

    I couldn't agree more!

    If you can't deal with cliffhangers just wait a bit - the next part is bound to be published in autumn this year.

  16. Oh gosh... I really, really, really want to read this review, but I have yet to read this book and don't want to spoil it! I can't wait to see what Ethan and Merit get up to in it! Oh, and Mal and Catcher too I suppose! ;)

  17. Oh this is a series I do want to read. And I'm good if there is no HEA. ;) Thank you for the review.

  18. Great review and I too agree about this series..the next book will make it or break it on whether I will read the next book in the series. I admit it took guts to do it , but it could lose her fans in the process. I also agree about the baddie too.


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